I am preparing for the TOEFL exam and I would appreciate your opinions about this text:

2. Do you agree or disagree with this statement: Education should be free.

I totally agree with this statement.
Firstly, and mainly, because education is one of the main pillars that gives people the chance to find a good job and have a good life. Thus, it is crucial to have free education to give anybody the equal rights and chances without depending on his or her origin or social background. In countries where students have to pay for their education to have a good possibility to find a job, they usually finish their studies with a huge number of debts. This forces them to take any work they find as soon as they graduate without giving them the chance to focus on searching an employment that makes them happy. And in my opinion, everybody should have this chance.
Secondly, for a government it is also good to give its people access to free education, because well-educated citizens tend to be more satisfied with their lives, they live healthier, have better jobs, pay more taxes.
All in all, in my opinion free education contributes to equilibrate societies and abolish injustices, so it is one of the most important “offers” a state has to provide to its citizens.

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I am preparing for the TOEFL exam and I would appreciate your opinions about this text:

2.	Do you agree or disagree with this statement: Education should be free.

I totally agree with this statement. 
Firstly, and mainly, because education is one of the main pillars that gives people the chance to find a good job and have a good life. Thus, it is crucial to have free education to give anybody the equal rights and chances without depending on his or her origin or social background. In countries where students have to pay for their education to have a good possibility to find a job, they usually finish their studies with a huge number of debts. This forces them to take any work they find as soon as they graduate without giving them the chance to focus on searching an employment that makes them happy. And in my opinion, everybody should have this chance.
Secondly, for a government it is also good to give its people access to free education, because well-educated citizens tend to be more satisfied with their lives, they live healthier, have better jobs, pay more taxes. 
All in all, in my opinion free education contributes to equilibrate societies and abolish injustices, so it is one of the most important “offers” a state has to provide to its citizens.

4mylgl6 · Answer

Hi! All in all, this is very good. I made some touch-ups to give it more finesse, but it's only a matter of style. Grammatically this is makellos!
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I agree with this statement completely.
Firstly, and mainly, because education is one of the main pillars that offers people the chance to find a good job and build a good life. It is therefore crucial that education be free, in order to ensure equal rights and opportunities, regardless of origin or social background. In countries where students have to fund their own education in order to secure a future job, they usually finish their studies with a great deal of debts. This in turn forces them to take any employment they find as soon as they graduate, without having the chance to seek one that makes them happy. In my opinion, everybody should be afforded this opportunity.
Secondly, it is also wise for governments to give their people access to free education, because well-educated citizens tend to be more satisfied with their lives, live healthier, have better jobs and pay higher taxes.
All in all, I believe that free education contributes to building equal societies and to level out social injustices, and so it is one of the most important foundations that a state should provide its citizens.

4mylgl6 · Answer

Das hier ist ähnlich wie der Konjunktiv im Deutschen: dass Ausbildung kostenlos sei.

Das hier ist ähnlich wie der Konjunktiv im Deutschen: dass Ausbildung kostenlos sei.

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