sure we can exchange :). i will figure out the voice messaging so we can communicate that way. For now I can make an edit to the writing :). The first word "realy", in English has 2 L's, though it only sounds like one making the spelling "REALLY".
hello again, apologies for not messaging you back sooner! it has been very crazy over here recently, but now I will be more available and have figured out the voice control for this app so I can send you voice messages
so the part that says "looking at that and fingered out" i would change "fingered" to "pointed". With english, if the children were exclaiming something and trying to show it, they would point at it. If I am reading it correctly as well, the word "sperking", i am not sure if you meant "sparking" or "sparkling".
The second section would be "the adults caring them". Replace caring, to "carrying" if you meant for that to be the description. If you meant caring, add in "caring for them" for a proper sentence.